Avant-garde to say the least. Please feel free to leave constructive criticism. I change all my poems all the time. I enjoy input and have changed each that I posted already. Never a final draft. If I am offensive, I cant apologize but will happily refer you to other talented poets. My requires an open mind, as mine is open all the time. I'm rhyme I'm reason I'm gun and I'm treason. I'm hot and I'm freezing I'm here but I'm leavin.