A Dog's Day
Well they say mortgage, marriage and maternity,are supposed to be the keys of the American Dream.
But I have sort of a separate philosophy,
cause I'd rather lift my leg when I pee.
Well they say mortgage, marriage and maternity,are supposed to be the keys of the American Dream.
But I have sort of a separate philosophy,
cause I'd rather lift my leg when I pee.
my dog died how could u. 1 star. shame shame shame shame on YOUUUUU. im im crying right noe mommy killed helself reading this poem because our doggie died and you wrote about and rubbed it in our face. and now my moomy is dead. its all your fault.
What is the meaning of this supposed to be? The only thing I can think about that would fit with the last line is the degradation of the prior "American Dream" by calling those who want it bitches. And if that is the intention- then bravo! Love it. Add in the title and the picture paints itself as anti white picket fence, with those that would want to settle down and have a stable life being in a sad state- "A Dog's Day".
Cute, short and sweet. 4/5
i don't entirely understand what this is supposed to be about but i enjoy that It was short and humorous; this was a very enjoyable poem for me. 4/5
I enjoyed it, short and sweet as I like to say. Ill give it 4 stars
Love it! The old KISS method, Keep it simple student! Great ending.
In no way am I judging the person behind this, but truly you can't be a child. So what is the message behind these poems or writing? Just curious.
Interesting
lol
Again, Adam, haha.
ok. I see you! Keep writing!