Rain Forever Yearly Battle


The beauty of near in your eyes dried inside as you cried many nights not to show it because exterior toughness.
Then you tried along moved to submerge your heart in darkness for drugs.
It's in ice as you live your life throughout your waking is a shadow.
This disruption for you is nothing to any faith of anything.

You asked why try?
I decided to tell you why.
I in this moment not hype to mirror your beliefs exceedingly.
It's into mines your mind of my mind undefined cold lines broken.
You would be holding a stature to laughter to suppress
the hurt.

It's in your soul broken hearted wouldn't work sometimes would does it?
It could should just fine never good we live all do share little empty.
Not being known words are asking there.
Who are you?

Able to see you in the future from a ravaged city from it did your dreams come true or the bombs blasting.
The bullets fired the bombs burn goals you aspire to have her Scottish her vampire self not achieved well.

Full in your tabs as you sip your blood and tea drink.
You would contemplate a draft look at your bills in defeat reality sinking.
It's British your accent when you speak free.
You are her.

It's a tombstone of stress while you smoke a cigarette with alcohol that beat with medication.
It's through your veins not even remembrance of your name.
Time is slipping drained away into a fantasy science fiction a book that has you hooked by the nose ring.
It would be like a fish that has been caught trapped from a reality under your thoughts.

Oh the pain while you try to stay sane while the ones loved died in vain.
It's so you will not to think detest erupts chaos the brunette green eyed.
Less off of the source of you wake asleep you feel alone
sense of humor have you one?

The powerful but with a lonely state of mind deceased to bleed tears hidden unknown.
It's internally sense of no purpose just hurting infinitely cursing everyone.
She doesn't worry if ever she would meet suddenly to see.
You say only to take me Draken Raven incredible.
Which is I am always here dear for you.
That's it to rinse away your pain the forever yearly battle.

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30 Responses to “ Single poem ”

  1. josh jenkens says:

    Amazing piece

  2. Leann says:

    I’m 34 with four adopted children and I love watching them play and reminiscing my childhood that went by way too fast

  3. Leann says:

    I’m always finding different ways to cope through poetry and improving my writing skills but I love this piece you shared

  4. Brandon Mann says:

    thank you

  5. Cheryl Strait says:

    Thank you all very much.

  6. Mary Cheyne says:

    I identify with many of the sentiments in this poem. I like the practical aspects of being female but need to be outside. Iris difficult to be view as something other than fitting the mold.

  7. Elizabeth Pinkhasov says:

    Oh my gosh! I didn’t expect so many people to reply to my poem, thank you SO MUCH!!!!! It brings me so much joy that a young poet like me can inspire people of all ages!

  8. Lola Green says:

    Wondrously done!

  9. denton says:

    wait who’s poem are we talking about

  10. Zipper Wheel says:

    Short poems are brilliant and difficult to master. The greatest talent is saying more with less, saying more than personal experience, saying something irrefutably human. I should practice this more myself, but I find it a greater treasure to me to create lyrics than to free myself and others with beautiful concise truths.

  11. Megha Chatterjee says:

    I think that such poems can beautifully say a lot of things that cannot be verbally explained to people. The way your friends or relationships hurt you, a pen and paper and a poetic mind can reduce your pain. I love the power of poem writing process..

  12. April Duboce says:

    Angelique, this is bold, descriptive and beautiful. I am very sorry for the pain you went through and are still experiencing. I was raped for 4 1/2 months after my amputation. Stay strong, keep writing and know you are loved by people you don’t even know. You are a strong and courageous woman, deserving of kind and respectful love. I pray this happens for you. I will try to upload my poem about abuse to my page. Sending you hugs, strength and love.

  13. April Duboce says:

    Stacy, this is beautiful. I hear and see the meaning beneath. To heal together with this wounded bird. I can tell you have an incredibly loving soul. I wish I could meet you.

  14. April Duboce says:

    Michael, this is so very special. The love between a son and a mother is different, yet strong. I’m thrilled you had such a wonderful Mom. Your vulnerability and the integrity of this poem tell me enough about your character.You ARE a good man

  15. Merton Pajibo says:

    Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my poem. I appreciate your constructive criticism.

  16. Kristina Karki says:

    Can you guys rate my poems?

  17. vivid emotions says:

    awesome

  18. Kellie Parks says:

    Incredible ! Good job

  19. Aisha.Hasan says:

    This was great

  20. Aisha.Hasan says:

    Would you read my poems. Merci

  21. M.CHANDRASENA RAJESWARAN says:

    The poem Tortured Soul is poignant to torture the reader’s soul!

  22. Stephen Brownfield says:

    This is a heart felt piece and speaks to my soul, as it makes me feel you soul.

  23. Ross Mitchell says:

    Thank everyone who commented on my poem, but with so many liking my poem, how did my poem get knocked down to 3 instead of a five

  24. MK says:

    I am a new writer, but I’ve been old. I’m great at writing, so I would love it if everyone would help me by rating my poems.

  25. Sara Naquin says:

    Love it!!

  26. Sara Naquin says:

    Love it!! I like how you expressed your words. Your very much heard!

  27. Ayushi Srivastava says:

    Thank you everyone for your appreciation ..I am a student so I am trying to improve my writing skills.

  28. Ayushi Srivastava says:

    Hey! I wrote it..don’t try to do that

  29. Leyla Ahmed says:

    I love this.

  30. Raven Moonshadow says:

    No you did not. Not this one. I have my intellectual property rights reserved.

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This is about a disgruntled woman in distress of the detest of her circumstance.