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He finally noticed

By DMAC   

When tears glistened her cheeks
He never noticed
When the light in her eyes faded
He never noticed
When her smile became forced
He never noticed
When her vibrant colors turned grey
He never noticed
When she cried softly at night
He never noticed
When his words broke her heart
He never noticed
When she was dying inside
He never noticed
When she stopped trying so hard
He never noticed
When she walked out the door
He never noticed
When she never came home
"HE FINALLY NOTICED"

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This poem expresses the raw feelings that one person may feel and the pure neglect that comes along daily while blatantly being taken for granted. When they finally give up its because no matter how loud their cry for help may become their once thought sole mate remains oblivious.



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