I will never forget you


Since we met as teenagers,you held a place in my heart..
Your eyes were so beautiful it set you apart..
Every time I would see you, you would hug me so tight..
Your smile was so big it would light up the night..
I will never forget you, I couldn't if I tried..
Your an angel I will be looking for at the end of this ride..

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  1. Lotte Alvarez

    liar


  2. Lotte Alvarez

    liar


  3. Moses Adedoyin

    Really?


  4. Moonlover80

    ❤️


  5. Philism

    Okay


  6. Eva Mcnulty

    Reminds me of me lol


  7. D.P. Zarkova

    this is sweet, but also tragic. It's over but you still cling to the idea of them. Been there done that.


  8. William Drake

    Lost love


  9. Mallorie Brown

    Hold on to that love and let it shine through to the other people around you. You are a poet, use your words for kindness and joy, spread it through the world. (Just some personal advice.) I adore the picture you painted.


  10. Marissa McDaniel

    Very good. Easy to read and relate to


  11. ShyPoet

    Short and melodic


  12. Ianna Dennis

    I admire how this relates to the subject of your first true love. Even if you find someone else, you will never forget.


  13. Bentley English

    Go to search and search up Bentley English please and thankyou


  14. Nancy Laine

    Young love, strong love, hard to let go of, I felt the weight.


  15. Dainty5

    Lovely and touching poem and the rhyming is great!


  16. Carolina Fae

    Made me think of my first grade school crush


  17. Carah Fury

    great concept and fun read! but I think you could work on tightening up your poems a bit, as they feel a bit wordy. Be more intentional with your word choices and punctuation.


  18. Alisa Smith

    Sweet, and I'd like to see more about the story! Do check your grammar though!


  19. Fleet

    Simple,nice


  20. Vera Obochi-Arum

    Awwwn ❤️❤️


  21. Laila Shaheen

    This reminds me of my best friend


  22. Charles Furbee

    Please convey your feelings in a deeper and richer way


  23. Isha Mohamed

    What a tender and sweet poem. I can relate to this so much. I can feel the love you are radiating for this someone in this poem!


  24. Bella Weeks

    Your work consistently shows your emotions. I can tell you have a poetic heart. Try researching different poetic forms. I personally derive a lot of inspiration simply from the type of poem I want to write. You should also proof-read your work before submitting it. Keep up the wonderful work! I look forward to seeing more from you!


  25. Oluwatosin(Toye) Buoye

    This reminds me of a friend too


  26. sneezy B

    A very effective simple message I think most everyone could get behind. I wish there was a little more potency with the imagery but the core message is nicely chosen. I'm really in no place to critique but out of all your poems I feel like sometimes they don't flow off the tongue too naturally. Maybe try to capture the thoughts more like how you'd say them out loud to someone. Still liked it though.


  27. Dallas H

    touching poem, good short read! Keep up this beautiful work.


  28. Dallas H

    touching poem, good short read! Keep up this beautiful work.


  29. Scotty

    great short read. Love this!


  30. Melody Quinlan

    Sweet yet a bit wordy. Keep up the work and u will go far!



  31. Sumon

    Every life is beautiful and wide When the truth is recognized. Keep going nice.


  32. Skylar Ogden

    Love this, I want to know more, go deeper.


  33. Florence Ellen

    Yes, even though the Love may be over, never forget the memories you shared. So moving, and I relate to you completely.


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  35. Victor Alan Blanchard

    You did an excellent job on your poem great work


  36. Jeldon

    simple but nice


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