Eh Hmmm
Excuse me sir and madameFrankly I don't give a damn
I'll likely do what I ought
Especially curse and drink a lot
Excuse me sir and madameFrankly I don't give a damn
I'll likely do what I ought
Especially curse and drink a lot
im five help. INAPROPRITE. My mommy drinks a nd curses lot. what does that mean? my daddy and moomy would make weird nosies in this bed room and then daddy left to get the mmik and never came back. then after my mommy said she was pregnant but never told daddy. then we woke up at 3am and drove 5 hours to Washington and we knocked on a door and a naked lady came out. then my daddy came out. without his clothes. and then my mommy and daddy started doing weird and making out. then the other lady joined in. what does this mean
me toooo
me toooo
why is there a naked lady on daddys phone that's not of mommy
This made me laugh, I wish it had a better title though.
This is pretty funny, I love the type of language you used, it reminds me of an old drunken sailor or the town drunk.
Please be appropriate. This is not funny. There are children here.
it's alright
This could be a personal preference, but i think punctuation could VASTLY improve the style of this. I’d write it: “Excuse me sir, and madame,/ Frankly, I don’t give a damn!/ I’ll likely do just what I ought,/ ‘Specially curse and drink a lot!”
I think this has potential, try seeing where you can take this
Eeehhh there still laws
Funny read, great poem!
Funny
Tee hee
Haha! I enjoyed this. I saw someone calling for a better title, though, and I agree.
Lotte Alvarez, why do you insist on being either extremely inappropriate or extremely rude? Is it a maturity issue? Do you need help? There are innocent children on here. Don't ruin their innocence with your personal issues.
Well kudos for you for being yourself
Very creative and fun read.