Eternal love
When the sun is getting red, my soul is thereWhen the sea is getting calm, my heart is there
When the mountains are full of snow, my love is there
When the wind is blowing
and trees are bending over the ground, my fear is there
When the moon is hiding behind the clouds
,
my secrets are finding a good place
When the sky is full of stars,
my dreams are smiling to me nice
When the rain is falling down,
I can stop my tears
When the birds are flying in the sky,
peace is embracing me with love and joys,
Truth is filling my heart with eternal love of the god there
I have already commented on this poem. I don't know why they are showing it to me again.
I've already commented on it too. When I write a poem, it sometimes saves, like, seven copies of it. Maybe that's what it's showing us?
Nice poem. I liked the way you used the word 'there's.
What a beautiful poem!
I loved this one! Love the simplicity and depth!
It is a good poem
Wow, This is so much awesome.
This poem beautifully connects emotions to natural elements, offering a sense of harmony between the self and the world around it. Each image—whether it’s the sun, sea, or wind—reflects a different part of the speaker's emotional landscape, from love and peace to fear and secrets, ending with a sense of divine love and truth. 5/5 stars. I really enjoyed it.
This poem beautifully connects emotions to natural elements, offering a sense of harmony between the self and the world around it. Each image—whether it’s the sun, sea, or wind—reflects a different part of the speaker's emotional landscape, from love and peace to fear and secrets, ending with a sense of divine love and truth. 5/5 stars. I really enjoyed it.
Inner peace great work !
Nice
Beautiful poem
I've seen this one already :(
Echoing other sentiments, this is beautiful and simple.
That was a very beautiful, uplifting poem thank you for sharing it and keep up the great work.
Great poem and subject!