Manifest God
Manifest Manifest
Manifest manifest God
Manifest Gods goodness
Manifest Gods greatness
Manifest Gods. Love
Manifest the hope he brings
Manifest the joy he gives
Manifest the peace he gives
Manifest the mercy he show to you
Manifest God
Praise God for his mighty
works
Praise God !
Manifest manifest God
Manifest Gods goodness
Manifest Gods greatness
Manifest Gods. Love
Manifest the hope he brings
Manifest the joy he gives
Manifest the peace he gives
Manifest the mercy he show to you
Manifest God
Praise God for his mighty
works
Praise God !
I think the message is great and clear, but I think it is a little TOO clear, understand? I think a metaphor would have been great here, and that you could show and not tell some parts. (Plus, minor error, grammatical mistakes are quite distracting.) I LOVE what you were getting at, but I think it could have been pulled off a little better.