Mother's Love


You made me whole a place for my soul,
for your love I would never pay a toll.

When I was little you did what you could,
you loved me more than any person would.

When I was hurt you'd say, let me see,
blowing and kissing right there you would be.

When I was bad you had a better way,
but when I was good you would say, hooray!

When giving advice it was never a demand,
you were always willing to lend a hand.

When I got older our lives grew apart,
but always together inside our heart.

When time passed by and age set in,
you held me tight like when I was ten.

You did this for me and also my brother,
that's why I love you and call you my mother.

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  1. Pratigya Pandey

    Your poem reflects the unconditional love that your mother give you. You are lucky dude. This poem is just awesome and filled with lots of love.


  2. Moonlover80


  3. mcegonha

    Gratidão.


  4. Sylvia Ross

    Awww! This is adorable, I loved it. The rhyming was on point and the message you sent was truly amazing.


  5. Philism

    This is what mothers do


  6. Jyost

    This is adorable. I love it! Thank you for sharing


  7. Brittney Johnson

    Awe you can feel the love


  8. Charity Jones

    Good to see such a beautiful relationship <3


  9. Rain Hope

    This is truly beautiful!


  10. Margaret Keck

    Beautifully written. Just beautiful.


  11. Abigail LaCombe

    Super sweet poem and it has a really great lyrical flow!


  12. William Drake

    Very nice.


  13. inspiremypen

    aww, so sweet


  14. Natalie Tyler

    It's so simple yet so beautiful!!


  15. Michelle Lynch

    Sweet words, gentle and real.


  16. Chandra Kumar

    Rhyme scheme is beautiful Poem's theme is wonderful Overall it's a wonder I have read.


  17. AIDAN E.M

    Real well



  18. ShyPoet

    A great Ode!


  19. Naina Sharma

    Heart touching so good


  20. Dainty5

    Beautiful! Love every word!


  21. Anya Robertson

    That's a really cute little poem.


  22. Viviane Maigre

    Such a sweet and heartfelt poem!


  23. Vicki Christison

    The perfect description of a mother's unconditional love.


  24. Trapti Gupta

    Touched the heart..


  25. Tori Roberson

    Very beautiful


  26. William Wright

    All about moms interesting,sterling words of thoughts there.


  27. CooliaJulia

    Last line is really nice


  28. Jose Propest

    I liked it but the rhyme felt forced in certain areas


  29. Mark A. Bigham

    Great job.


  30. Tanya

    Loved the way you explained mother's love. However the choice of words could be improved.


  31. Diya Agastya

    Very sweet


  32. Fleet

    I'm sure Mom loves that poem


  33. Jack Carter

    Wow. Coming from a man who grew up without a father, I feel this. The way you explained motherly love is like no other, the only word I can use is perfect. Your poem almost brought a tear to my eye, thinking about the memories of me and my mother. The bond we had was beautiful, such an incredible read. Thank you.


  34. Francisca Cyprian

    Beautiful. Love it.


  35. Vera Obochi-Arum

    Awwwn Very touching.


  36. Nat Hall

    very sweet. the poem also flows beautifully, the word choices exude comfort


  37. Dave Cleveland

    Made me miss my mother.


  38. Hellen Nuhu

    The message is simple yet comforting


  39. Oluwatosin(Toye) Buoye

    Thanks for expressing the hugeness of the love of a mother.


  40. Christina Alley

    Beautiful subject! Good mothers truly don't get all the credit they deserve.


  41. D~Miracle

    This is soo beautiful


  42. Dallas H

    this is such a pretty poem, good work on this one.


  43. Gracie Bolding

    This is truly a beautiful poem, it captures and puts into words the true love that bonds a mother and a child.


  44. Abigail Okai

    Good


  45. Scotty

    love the sense of unconditional love in this poem, makes it an easy read.


  46. Reuben Nieves

    76 Iterations of the same poem. A true poet only needs one, not 76 clones.


  47. Pheadra Johnson

    Nice and Real !


  48. Jen

    A bond of a mother and child is the most beautiful thing. You betrayed it beautiful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading.


  49. Merry Lee Smalls

    Your Mum sounds the best--nicely written. Keep writing!


  50. Melody Quinlan

    This helps remind me of how lucky I am to have a mother who loves me when so many of my friends have @bus!ve mothers


  51. Arun S

    The tale had been told about how your mother was for you there in every thing...


  52. Shelby Hight

    Wow just Wow your an amazing writer with so much depth this is an amazing poem!!!


  53. Skylar Ogden

    Wow I loved this.


  54. m_little

    Cute


  55. Chidozie Ikokwu

    When giving advice it was never a demand, you were always willing to lend a hand. pure and true words.


  56. Dawn Miller

    Absolutely beautiful.


  57. Wordsmith.Meo

    Awww this is so cute


  58. Victor Alan Blanchard

    That was a very beautiful you did an excellent job well done


  59. Mya Randall

    so sweet, id cry if my daughter wrote a cute poem like this about me!


  60. Steven

    Gotta love the moms. Nice!


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