Will of the Ocean
Inundated by countless streams,
Formed of the essence of life,
Silent & turbulent; living, yet devoid of life.
The manifestation of a myriad wills,
Pursuing their ultimate goals
As a society bent on success.
Finally manifesting as a whole,
A powerful shell of an existence;
For the purpose is lost,
Essence deviated,
Of the once glorious will.
Contaminated by fellow streams,
With whom together it's formed
Only to fall prey to hollow eternity.
Formed of the essence of life,
Silent & turbulent; living, yet devoid of life.
The manifestation of a myriad wills,
Pursuing their ultimate goals
As a society bent on success.
Finally manifesting as a whole,
A powerful shell of an existence;
For the purpose is lost,
Essence deviated,
Of the once glorious will.
Contaminated by fellow streams,
With whom together it's formed
Only to fall prey to hollow eternity.
This Poems Story
I prepared this as an assessment to be presented at school. I was awarded decent marks for it so I was thinking what responses I'd get if i were to post it somewhere publicly. Open to any and all criticism as long as it helps! :)
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