song of lovely sorrow


parting so sour
the taste is bitter

love deathly addicting
it's power made to sway

the ache of defeat is a formidable foe
when parting is sour with bitterness in tow

the tomb of love from which I stand
made to stay like an empty hand

though I've lived there for a while
the aching stays, making it hard to smile

while all I say is true, I do not condemn love
for it's wonderful wings soar like a dove

made to soar, but not to stay
eventually the dove has to pay

this is the truth behind love
though knowing this do not falter
continue to let it soar like a dove

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when I was around the age of 13, I met a girl, by this point in my life though, I had already dated many girls, but when I say that my heart leaped, it leaped. we dated for a year almost, and that was the most honest bliss I have ever felt, when it ended I felt deep sorrow, but as time went on I found that life will move on...eventually. and from these thoughts came this poem. I also wrote the first one of this \"series\" of poems i guess you could say, it\'s called \" Remembrance of first love\'.